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Careless Car-Wash (Request)

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     Lewis dunked his sponge in the bucket of soapy water and dragged his arm across his forehead to wipe away sweat. It was a hot day to be washing his dad's truck, but at least he had help. "Hey Brian, this side's ready for a rinse!"
     On the other side of the pickup, Brian put down his tire scrubber long enough to grab the end of the hose and toss it to Lewis. It was a coil hose, the kind that looked like a rubber slinky and was supposed to stay tangle-free. Which, Lewis admitted as he caught the hose, it was pretty good at doing. Unfortunately, the endpiece that screwed into a spray nozzle had broken off a year ago. Instead of buying a new hose, they just controlled the flow with a kink and a chip clip. Now Lewis undid the kink, pressed his thumb over the end to create a wide fan of water, and started spraying the soap off the truck.
     Brian finished cleaning the tire and hubcap. "I'm ready for the hose again when you're finished," he called to Lewis. He started moving his stuff to the next wheel as Lewis finished rinsing the driver's side window.
     Lewis was about to toss the hose back to Brian when he had a thought. Kinking the hose, he walked around the front of the truck to come up behind the other boy. "Here you go, Brian," he said, tapping Brian on the shoulder. Brian turned around... and a blast of cold water hit him square between the eyes.
     Brian squawked and rocked backward, spluttering as he held up his hands to block the jet of water. Lewis laughed and darted the spray around to hit him wherever he wasn't blocking. Then it was his turn to squawk as Brian lunged forward and grabbed the hose, yanking it out of Lewis's hands. "Ha!" he said triumphantly, spraying Lewis in the face.
     Lewis darted around the corner of the pickup, Brian right behind. They'd made it halfway around when the hose caught under a tire, and Brian reversed direction. Lewis didn't notice... until he rounded the corner and ran headfirst into Brian's chest. Brian went down in an impromptu tackle with Lewis right on top of him.

     Brian sat up and shook his head, rubbing his chest where Lewis had hit. Beside him, Lewis made a strange noise, and he turned to look -- and saw Lewis staring cross-eyed at the hose sticking out of his mouth.
     Lewis yanked the hose out, sending a stream of water through the air until Brian kinked the hose. Lewis was coughing and spluttering, and Brian started to feel worried. "Hey, are you okay?" he asked.
     Lewis caught his breath, coughed again, and shook his head. "The hose went down my throat!" he said, disbelievingly. "It was all the way in there!" He pressed a hand to his stomach, feeling a slight bulge. "Man, that was weird," he said.
     Brian looked at him curiously. "What do you mean?" he asked. Lewis tossed a sponge at his head. "I mean you started to fill me up like a water balloon!"
     "I didn't! It was an accident," Brian retorted, "and you ran into me! And anyway, drinking a little water won't hurt you."
     Lewis glared at him, then grabbed the hose. "That wasn't drinking, that was -- you know what, I'll show you!" Brian didn't react at first -- his brain was still processing Lewis's words, and he figured Lewis was just going to spray him in the face again -- and Lewis had no trouble pushing the hose in his mouth. The thin tube curved right down his throat, Lewis let go of the kink, and a jet of water squirted down into his stomach.
     Brian tried to pull away, but the truck was behind him and he didn't have room. He tried to push Lewis away, but Lewis had a firm grip, and the hose only went farther down his throat. He was full, so full, and still more water rushed into his stomach... and his eyes widened as he felt his stomach begin to swell.
     He dropped a hand to his waist and found a bulge... a growing bulge. His other hand dropped down to clutch his midsection, and Lewis gasped as he, too, noticed the bump. He pulled the hose out, looking guilty. "I-- I'm sorry, I didn't mean to--"
     Brian wasn't listening. With the hose out, his belly had stopped growing, leaving a smooth round dome that shifted under his hands. "Woah..." he breathed.
     He looked up and saw Lewis staring. "This is... you shouldn't have done that, but this is pretty cool. Really weird, but cool." He stood up and stretched, watching the bump stretch and squash as he bent back, then forward. When he was bent over all the way, his belly button even stuck out. "Wow, that is weird," he breathed.
     Lewis was still staring. "That doesn't hurt?" he asked, his shame already buried by curiosity. Brian rubbed his belly again. "Not really," he said. "In fact, I think... I think I might be able to hold more."
     Lewis's eyes widened. "You what? I... hmmm... how much more?"
I'm struggling with this. I don't have that much time to write right now, but even when I can get an hour or so I just can't get anything done. :( So I'm putting this up here, as-is. It's pretty complete, story-wise; you can imagine whatever events you want happening after the last sentence. And please tell me what you think happens -- maybe something will kick me over this writer's block.
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Sorry to know about your writer's block. How about this> Brian is looking at Lewis's middle, and then at his own big new found belly. Lewis replies > Well what are you waiting for Brian, fill your belly up more? Brian replies > You first, you are such a skinny girl, dude. Lewis thinks a minute a little pissed off, then swallows the hose filling his belly up fast until his belly is barely bigger than Brian's big belly. Brian takes the hose back, and swallows it again for a long while then slowly sits down because of the shear water weight. Brian pulls the hose out because he's sure he will burst if he drinks a drop more. Lewis is very impressed by Brain more than doubling his belly size with his large size Yoga ball belly shining like a wet light red bowling ball. Lewis takes the hose but then replies> If this kills me, then will you tell the funeral house to sew me, & my belly back up with the biggest ball that can be fit in me? Brian says> Then you do like having a big belly sticking out too? Lewis replied >Yep, but i need it a bit bigger . Brian replied back> OK, you got it dude, now will you do the same for me because, i love my new huge heavy belly? Lewis replies > Yes, i will make sure you keep that great belly. Lewis swallows that hose with a worried look then expands his belly to a small beach ball size as he removes the hose with his big belly hurting a bit. Brain replies back> That's it, your not going to pass me up again? Lewis replies > Nope, It hurts way too much now. Brain wonders, then ask Lewis if it looks like he is gaining fat all over his body, & face now? Lewis replies quickly back> dude water is not fattening at all. Brian replies back what about "water weight gain"? Lewis replies back> Fat weighs less than water, but is not the same thing at all. Brian replies > I need a strong wheel barrow for my belly, don't you need one too? Lewis replies > No not yet, i am not a weak girl dude. Hey you two get back tooo..... what the... what happen here? Lewis replies> Well boss, i mean dad, we both got super thirsty in this heat, you want to try some? Dad replies> OK, son hand me that hose, and show me how to do this without me choking to death or popping open. Cool dad, Brian thinks to himself. Dad pats his new beach ball size belly then replies > We are all going to be peeing like wild horses for days, especially you Brian. Now lets get your skinny mother in on this. Lewis's mother yells you three are wasting tons of wat.... what happening here, why... are those your tummies? Dad replies > Yes, & your micro tummy is next. Mom replies> No, you are all crazy, wow it's so hot out here. Dad replies > Get her. Lewis does grab her by one of her feet, & then puts the hose in his mothers mouth. Then he said, sorry mom but you will thank us later. After the hose is removed. Mom replies in shock> My poor tummy is way too big, but i kind of like it as i look 9 months pregnant again. Brian replies > More like 12 months preggo with triplets. All 3 say shut up Brian or you will pop open today. The End.       Hope this helps.